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In Knowing
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In Knowing |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In Knowing Where do I start when I speak from my heart, Does my soul step in to then intervene? Are my intentions as clear as they seem When from the depths of my feel, I impart The words of love I would speak from my heart? How can I know that the words I implore Leave you replete, your desire to explore Was now to end as you would have before You all that you might need, forevermore, Do you hear my sweet, that I love you more? Impractical questions muddy my mind Your eyes won’t rest until they have found mine Your hand grasping fingers that you would entwine Electric feelings run rampant, to find My soul’s center, as lips silently bind. In winding join, with meld of spirits’ songs Coming to the point where we both belong No turning back, from this what is not wrong Intensity grows, willingly, and strong no other love, we’ve known this all along Where do I start then, to speak from my heart, Does my soul step in to then intervene? Are my intentions as clear as they seem That you are all I need, forevermore, Do you hear, my sweet, that I love you more? |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Sweet blossoms of love, fragrant on the vine. A joy to read. Coal |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
to the top of my romantic treasure box - - I cannot imagine any forthcoming poem to push it aside for top spot - ever |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Some real lucky feller, somewhere. Sigh... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-16-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hear. . . I hear. . . *sigh*. . . if only these words were meant for me. . . but. . . yet. . . they are still speak to my heart . . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In winding join, with meld of spirits’ songs Coming to the point where we both belong No turning back, from this what is not wrong Intensity grows, willingly, and strong no other love, we’ve known this all along Where do I start then, to speak from my heart, Does my soul step in to then intervene? Are my intentions as clear as they seem That you are all I need, forevermore, Do you hear, my sweet, that I love you more? ================= Oh my, Lady is so sweetly inspired ... and the rhyme scheme of this is divine very lovely write Lady W...indeed!! In another life...I know I loved you then |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Comments are commendably varied and interesting, thank you all for coming in to read. |
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