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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-16 06:47 AM



Silhouette Scene

Windows bared, but for the twilight
Clustered shadows, watching, hid.
Movement dusting, slight to incite
The view of softness, tempting bid.

Silhouette, her edges showing
Finely detailed, outlined curves.
Eyes in follow, slowing knowing
What she holds there, in reserve.

Waiting for inviting moment
Time will show it's face, one day.
Out of hiding, sent from torment
Velvet blessings, she'll convey.

Silhouette transmits desire
Eyes watch eyes, ignite the fire.


~Wynter

© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Coal Surrender
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1 posted 2001-04-16 07:44 AM


Sultry and curious movement with a lingering impression.  
      
                        Coal

                    

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-04-16 08:43 AM


soft!  This had a soft feeling
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-04-16 08:59 AM


Hmmmm. Better watch those eyes ;-)
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-04-16 10:00 AM


Coal Surrender
that's me   sultry and curious sometimes at the same time, too.  thank you for reading  
                    
Hey there Sweet Rose,
I am feeling soft this morning... thanks  huggzzz
(psssttt  won't be on much this morning , am painting the steps and hallway "on the way to the  3rd  floor")  


Interloper
and which eyes might those be..or  eyes of whom?  WOW..nice thought for a title don't steal it now..Eyes of Whom....will do later on my paint break... thank YOU!!!


Maureen/Wynter
Hmmmm. Better watch those eyes  



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-16-2001).]

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