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Alan
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0 posted 2001-04-15 03:34 PM



My Lady Love

Oh my lady love
You are my love
I bid you this day
Come to me
My beautiful Sorceress
Set my heart free
Come to me
My wonderful seductress
Come weave your magic
Come to me
Let your love flow
Till I can not breathe
But please don’t leave
Your love was sent to me
By a good friend of mine
She weaved a spell
Upon your mind
Now my love
It is our time
To live
To love
A time to give
To each other..
Our eternal love


© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2001-04-15 03:40 PM


I'm sure she'll love this ... very nice
great flow ... very well written

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-15 03:45 PM


Alan
this is
so
wonderful

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2001-04-15 06:09 PM


Alan - a beautiful writing for your lady love.

BC

Alan
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4 posted 2001-04-15 10:11 PM


Rex...she did ..thank you for your comments

Sunshine thank you for taking the time to read it and comment

Bill...thank you

Paula Finn
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5 posted 2001-04-15 11:40 PM


Very loving...lucky woman you have there
Sven
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6 posted 2001-04-16 06:57 PM


wonderful Alan!!

this really flows very nicely. . . I like it. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-04-16 06:59 PM


She is a very fortunate woman to be held in such a delightful spell Alan ... very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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