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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-04-15 07:19 AM


An icy chill engulfs my body
As I leave through my back door
I begin to wonder with a little sadness
Is the sun going to shine anymore?

As we head towards winter
There are many changes before my eyes
As my garden begins to take on
A completely different disguise

The bright flowers from Summer
Are now few and far between
The birds are taking shelter
Not so often are they seen

The trees are becoming bare
As their leaves begin to fall
Very soon my beautiful birch trees
Will have no covering at all

The soil is becoming much colder
But below the surface there lays a surprise
In a few months time a treasure
Will be unearthed before my eyes

So many flower bulbs
Now lie dormant in the earth
I must wait so patiently
Until I view the first signs of their birth

Crocuses, daffodils and jonquils
Will begin this spectacular display
Then ranuculi and anemones
Will burst forth from where they lay

A kaleidescope of color
Will once again spread across my yard
As my cupid statue, with his trusty bow & arrow
Will be so proudly standing guard

Suetang

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-15 08:13 AM


How easy for us to forget that it is not spring everywhere...a lovely write...and yes, the sun shall come again!




Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-04-15 08:59 AM


This was a wonderful display of the anticipation of spring renewal after a long winter's sleep. Just lovely, thank you!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2001-04-15 11:20 AM


ah yes you took me through seasons in this one!  Thank you!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-04-15 11:28 AM


ahh yes we all await spring and its many gifts
beautiful poem of anticipation...
very cool title.
well done  

In another life...I know I loved you then
Lightning strikes twice...we're destined again.
We dont have to make promises...we were always meant to be

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2001-04-15 06:48 PM


I'm so glad you all liked the journey through my garden and how different my garden would look to your write now.  It's quite amazing to think that while my garden is shutting down for Winter, yours are bursting forth with new growth.

Janet Marie, thanks so much for the lovely picture.....it was so very beautiful.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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