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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2001-04-15 12:07 PM



The world crumbles before me
as the murdered call out
for vengence
and the starving Ethiopian cries out
for even a crust of bread
a girl cringes in the corner
of her dark room
terrified of the sound
of her father's voice
for her the night can't seem to end!

The hollow empty shells
looking for something
to give meaning to
their empty lives

But words come easy
to me
Great poetic disertations
and moving images
flow freely
but these
can't feed the starving
or avenge the dying
or give meaning to
the lifeless

Have I become the very thing
I hate?
Waiting for change
but sitting here doing nothing
I feel paralyzed
the dream is in my mind
but my body can not complete it
for lack of understanding

What a tragic thing
if all are like me!

© Copyright 2001 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-15 01:34 AM


This is a good poem Brad, but we all have to start from where we are and encourage the next person to do his part. Perhaps you are meant to help with your words.  Joyce
Brad Majors
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2 posted 2001-04-15 01:51 AM


thank you.
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3 posted 2001-04-15 03:12 AM


We can only make a difference in those around us in our sphere of influence. Lets begin with endeavoring to do the best we can do with just that much. None of us can change the whole world, but all of us, as grains of sand can unite to form a beautiful beach. This was so worthy a cry from the heart. I commend your heart for it's convictions. Each day step by step and person by person. God bless you!

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thecraig
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4 posted 2001-04-15 03:55 AM


Some may no not have your need to discourage suffering & some thrive on others lack social position.Lusting feverishly vain ambition.
Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-04-15 09:12 AM


Thank you for this very thought-provoking verse Brad.  You made me examine aspects of my own life with this piece, very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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6 posted 2001-04-15 11:33 AM


this is so gut-wrenching.....all I can say is well done.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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