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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-04-15 12:00 PM



Six Flags Over Texas
Was always good to me
Brought my wife on our first date
And now the family

Six flags Over Texas
Since tall enough to ride
Speeding down I-30
My eyes were staring wide

It's been quite a few years
Since we’ve all come here
The rides still tower high
And they cause a quake of fear

The Shockwave’s loopty loops
And clacking Judge Roy Scream
We feel like we are kids again
Or maybe in a dream

Which ride will be our first
We open up the map
My wife needs a restroom break
And I already need a nap

Tis forty years of Six Flags
We've not been in over ten
All the people in the line
Are they the same we saw back then

Used to be a thing we did
The Log Ride was always first
We’d dip our hands in the water
And relieve ourselves of thirst

We scanned the map all over
We couldn’t find the ride
My little child inside of me
Quite nearly up and cried

Now it’s called Ozarka Splash
Are the Ozarks in Mexico
Maybe they thought they’d name it
And nobody’d ever know

My wife began to chatter
I asked to see the matter
She told me the ole Cliffhanger
Was now called the new Wildcatter

Oh Six Flags Over Texas
You were always good to me
But where once stood the Bobsled
La Vibora, I now see

The kids were in their bliss
They didn’t know there was a change
Everything was new to them
Although to us was strange

The ghost of the Spinnaker
And the phantom Spindletop
We’ll ride every thing we can
And the fun will never stop

Oh Six Flags Over Texas
The door to my inner child
Even Hurricane Harbor now
Used to be called Wet and Wild

Then I woke up quickly
And I was happy and alive
On the Log Ride high with you
And it’s 1985.

Oh Six Flags Over Texas
You’re a dream that will come true
And even though you always change
We’ll always come back to you

In 1985
I got my first real kiss
On the good ole Log Ride
Call it what you wish

Oh, Six Flags Over Texas
You were always good to me
Brought my wife on our first date
And now the family

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 04-15-2001).]

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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
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1 posted 2001-04-15 12:07 PM


As a kid I lived in Bedford, TX so close to Six Flags, but never did I get to go. Made up for it, went to Astro World in Houston on my honeymoon. I was young what can I say!!!
John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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Texas
2 posted 2001-04-15 12:21 PM


Salud, mi Amigo! Es un poema muy excelente!
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
3 posted 2001-04-15 12:29 PM


salud salud fellow texans!
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2001-04-15 02:49 AM


Never been there til right now, with your poem Walt. Thanks for the ride.  
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2001-04-15 09:21 AM


Ahhhh Walt ... I knew there was a kindred spirit somewhere in here. Rides, rides, rides ... I've not been to 6 Flags specifically, but soooo many other places. I'm a ride fiend, a bungy jumper, and a Disney World fanatic. To go back after so many years and reminisce ... nothing like it my friend. You've brought back so many memories for me with this piece, I loved it!  I now need a roller-coaster fix, pass the adrenaline please!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 2001-04-15 09:29 AM


6th reply from texas  
elisaseyes
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since 1999-07-15
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fort worth texas
7 posted 2001-04-15 08:04 PM


And the 7th reply from heaven. Weeee sending this one to the top just like the Chute Out.
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