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Someplace Beyond Today
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Someplace Beyond Today |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Someplace just past tears Somewhere beyond tomorrow I will come to you And all Our hearts sorrows Fade away to forget In the warmth of your smile and soft Sweet kiss But 'til that someday I'll hold you close in my dreams Patiently waiting For you To realize Its not just fantasy But a real possibility For us To reach beyond friends To that place beyond the tears In the days beyond |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Paula. . . just try not to wait too long. . .  --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I love reaching beyond. 'Its not just fantasy But a real possibility' Make it so !  Lovely write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In the words of Robert Schuller..."Build a dream and the dream will build you."...James |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very sweet, Paula. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
But 'till that someday Keep writing of the love. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Paula, I'd say that this is one of your best, I love the first three lines! Excellent write~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah that place beyond the tears.....what a wonderful thought.....sounds like paradise to me. Wonderfully written Paula my dear sweet poet friend! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, it is paradise!!! Kathleen Blake |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely sentiments Paula ... filled with longing and anticipation of what may come, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sven...I'm trying...just gotta wait on my love to show himself Marge...truly I am trying to make it so...slowly to be sure...but slow is best dont you think? James...yes darlin...and its time we both built our dreams Joyce...Thank you JLR...I will...you know that I will...hugs Melissa...thank you...I like those lines as well... ethome...hi sweet poet man...you can join me in paradise whenever you want...thanks for your sweet words and encouragement...HUGS Kathleen...it certainly would be...thank you Kit...its the what may come I'm counting on...thank you |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I loved the thought of a dream coming true. A very wonderful poem Paula |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Paula...lots of wonderful comments already. Just another echo here. Well done. Bob |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful work Paula! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Alan...it is a great idea...and it does happen...it just takes patience Bob...your echo is worth a thousand words to me dear friend thanks EagleOne...you know what your words mean to me... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I thought this was such an appealing wish that I would just stop by and read it again! FULL OF FAITH AND HOPE! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Paula, I related to this one. It was so well written....our dreams our so important to us. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
You combined these two forms nicely...nice emotions too |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...well you know me sweet poet...ever the stubborn optimist...hugs Gentle Spirit...dreams are very important...they keep hope alive...thanks forevernbluejeans...thanks |
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