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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-04-14 09:11 AM


Ssenryus

sun swindles surprise
laying forth before my eyes
loving in your gaze

sybaritical
symmetry of two so fine
symbolizes us

unsystematic
synthesizing notes of love
realize the twine



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Wilfred Yeats
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1 posted 2001-04-14 10:02 AM


The siblant sounds of your Seenryus (liked the visual extra 'e') struck a sensuous streak in me - - I loved this
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2 posted 2001-04-14 11:13 AM


Kari dear heart,

Totally pure write
Illumes my star studded night
Sunshine shines her light

You know how hard these are for me love, but this was brought by your infinitely supperior sparkle.

Love and warm stuff
              Puck
                

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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3 posted 2001-04-14 05:15 PM


these are a joy to speak aloud. . . a veritable feast for the speaker in all of us. . .

wonderful my friend. . .  

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4 posted 2001-04-14 05:21 PM


How did you know I was from Sybaris?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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