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Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 661
Tennessee

0 posted 2001-04-14 01:18 AM


I really, really thought
you might be the one
to make this heart of mine
finally choose not to run.
I tried really hard
to fall in love with you.
But I cannot tell
this old heart what to do.

I made a point
to laugh at all your jokes.
Against my better judgement
I even met your folks.
I feel you must admit
I really did my part.
And if you have any grievances
take them up with my heart.

I didn't say a word
when you didn't hold the door.
After all, maybe guys
don't do that anymore.
Yes, I thought your hair
was a little bit too long.
You play the radio way too loud
and you always sing along.

Your favorite thing to do
is stay home and watch t.v.
The only time you took me out
was if one of us could eat free.
And I tried not to laugh
because I didn't want to tease,
but you wore shorts a little too short
and your socks up to your knees.

So, please don't take this hard,
but I think you ought to know
that my heart packed up and headed south
a long, long time ago.
I guess I'll follow suit.
It's just what I gotta do,
but I'm sure one day you're gonna find
the girl that's meant for you.

© Copyright 2001 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-04-14 02:05 AM


it's what you have to do. . .

I love this one. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-04-14 09:31 AM


Hey you tried, even went as far as meeting the parents. Thank goodness your heart knew what a cheapskate he was and got you moving south. Enjoyed!
Passions Voice
Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291
Michigan
3 posted 2001-04-16 08:21 PM


Take it from me Tennessee, it's the right thing to do.

I loved this one.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


confetti
Junior Member
since 2001-04-12
Posts 33

4 posted 2001-04-16 08:24 PM


This made me smile and I'm glad you followed your heart and not someone elses.
snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2001-04-18 06:24 PM


Hey, TA...you can't tell your heart what to do...it definitely has a life of its own, that's for sure!  Great write, m'friend!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2001-04-18 06:28 PM


We can't tell our heart what to do...so true...sometimes we wonder why its doing it...James
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2001-04-18 11:16 PM


Sometimes it just isn't meant to be, Angel.  You did the right thing, though.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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