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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-04-13 09:06 PM


A Circle Of Time


A circle of time
having read here today,
reminded of moments that caused
me to stay.Words of encouragement touches
of kind.....hugs from the warm thoughts...... that
words seemed to find.. Friendships....... then made,
wanting none of  to miss,  understanding  now poets
their words about  this...  Staying the course... through
the hardships of  time, ....relishing  moments.... of eyes,
smiling mine.... It's a circle..... of memories......of hurts
of desires...of wantings.. of losses.. and  burnings afire.
Holding on... to those hopes and.... enveloping  those
dreams,  that we keep... in our hearts ....that we
see... in  moon beams ..  Or when darkness
surrounds us.. as time.. turns to night
we will  circle.... in dreaming
'til the morn ....brings
new...... light


Maureen
Oct 14, '99

*Marge you bring me to tears sometimes
with your memories of me when I thought all I was,  was another lonely poet on lovingyou.com with no one really paying any attention to me.


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02
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1 posted 2001-04-13 09:09 PM


I simply LOVE this! Great appearance, wonderfully sincere words...spoken like a true poet!  
~Becky~

Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2001-04-13 09:29 PM


You've done a wonderful job on this Maureen
A warm and touching message
And that little Marge is very special too


Kay
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3 posted 2001-04-13 09:30 PM


a lovely tribute to your friend, Marge.  Thank you, Wynter

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

inot2B
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4 posted 2001-04-13 10:17 PM


Beautiful you have enclosed a friendship of love. I'm glad Marge ask that you put this out for us who were not here in 1999.
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-04-14 06:12 AM



~Becky~, Rex Allen McCoy,
Kay, inot2B
thank you for stopping to read and respond..I wrote this in 1999 one of my very first poems ever on another  site..it was not for here nor originally for Marge, but for a place where I first began posting. There were no posted responses and I don't think there are even any today. But  my emails were always flooded  with people from all over the world thanking me for touching them with my words, asking me to write them poems for anniversaries, birthdays, boyfriends etc...and the  warmth was so overwhelming that I wrote this poem there. Marge  asked for me to place it here  in a response to another of my poems and so I was warmed by the thought she remembered me then, let alone a poem she must have saved in order to remember it's title. So this was at her request I posted this for Passions...and I thank her for her kindness and spirit that seems to rise above all others.

Maureen/ Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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6 posted 2001-04-14 10:25 AM


Maureen~
THIS IS IT ... I've saved it since October 17, 1999 ....
So inspired was I, by not only the message contained within it, but the form.
You took me on a circle that beckons me today !
And .... I will always thank you for that meeting.
Hugs and much, much love ....
Yeah ... love that touches others is just the greatest thing there is.

YOU keep writing, lady ... I'll keep remembering this one for all time.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-04-14 10:27 PM


thank you again Marge..a wonderful memory you have huggzzzzzzzzzz

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Marsha
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8 posted 2001-04-15 12:23 PM


Maureen, I remember always how kind and touching you have been. Forever supportive and ever ready to help, I thank you for this pure beauty it radiates love and light. We are all in the circle, what goes around comes around, and i thank you for passing on this wonderful piece.

Margie girl is always such a darling, and truly deserves every tribute she gets. And you to Maureen love, you have a power held in your words that I find utterly astounding.
I congratulate you on this as it is as near perfect in content and form as I have ever seen.

Take care love as always
                 Mushy
                    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2001-04-15 08:21 PM


It's nice to see you back Marsha..and thank you for such sweet words today. I try to be  nice but sometimes it  doesn't show through, those who really know  me  know I am  ok enough.. And yes Marge is really wonderful as are so many others on here. huggz and I  Hope your Easter holiday was  especially nice.

Maureen/Wynter
Take care love as always
                 Mushy

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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