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Beckalini
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0 posted 2001-04-13 08:41 PM


The Land of Dreams (A Bed-time Story)


Is there a dream that is yet to be dreamt?
And if so, where do these un-dreamt dreams reside?

I imagine it’s a sacred place of moonlit caves and gentle streams.
Dark crevices, harbouring twinkling miracles of night-visions,
And glowing raindrops of a stranger’s yesteryear.
Where moss grows stubbornly upon the dampened walls,
But does not cover the tiny, stardust footprints that
Illuminate the underlying rock-face, leaving tell-tale tracks
Of where once un-dreamt dreams were hidden.
But they lead, now, only to empty spaces.

If such a place exists, who decides which dreams should remain?
And which should be cast into the night air,
Free to float intimately though personal air and inner feelings?

I imagine winged dream-fairies direct these chosen few.
With delicate wings of lace, trimmed with feathers, and stars in their eyes,
These twinkle-cheeked airy postmen flutter gently among the clouds,
Leaving lustrous trails in their wake, and illuminating the surrounding darkness.
The shooting dream-stars know not how to hate or fear, only to love and cherish,
And with precise and delicate hands,
They cleanse the feathered webs of sleep-safe –
For they are the nursemaids of dreamcatchers too.

To be such an entity would be a blessing beyond the realms of imagination.
We could walk the land of undreamt dreams and unrealised aspirations,
And pluck from a trickling stream, someone’s future sleep-light.

I know that somewhere in that place, is my tonight’s dream.
I will be a dream Columbus,
Sailing the sea of hopes and desires,
So that I can discover a world of dreams
That exceeds expectation
And tears down barriers of belief.



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-04-13 08:49 PM


BeckALini~
Oh my !
This is just charming.

'With delicate wings of lace, trimmed with feathers, and stars in their eyes,
These twinkle-cheeked airy postmen flutter gently among the clouds'


I just LOVE the very thought of those
'twinkle-cheeked airy postmen'

Put a smile on my face and a giggle in my heart !
Thank you for both !
~*Marge*~

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Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-04-13 08:50 PM



Just wonderful!  

Take care,
Melissa~

Beckalini
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3 posted 2001-04-13 09:25 PM


Marge - such enthusiastically positive comments coming from you means so much to me. Thank you ever so much  

Melissa - your kind words are taken to heart. Thank you  

~Becky~

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4 posted 2001-04-14 12:53 PM


this is very well done!!!

I love it. . . off to find new lands in the dreams of our hearts and souls. . .

excellent!!!



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Bill Charles
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5 posted 2001-04-14 04:07 PM


Beckalini - a master piece of words you have created. This is just wonderful, and just so touching.

BC

Nate Dogg
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6 posted 2001-04-15 09:35 AM


Beautiful imagery...excellent writing!!!

Nathan

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-04-15 09:38 AM


"They cleanse the feathered webs of sleep-safe –
For they are the nursemaids of dreamcatchers too."

Oh my ... what a beautifully descriptive verse Beckalini!  You wove such wonderful imagery throughout this tale, I very much enjoyed this piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Beckalini
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8 posted 2001-04-15 05:52 PM


Sven, I admire your work greatly, and your response means a great deal to me. Thanks  

BC - Thank you so much for commenting. You are an inspiration to me around these parts  

Nate Dogg - I just hope that when you were reading, you saw the picture I had in my head whilst I was writing. Thanks  

Kit - I am glad you enjoyed it...I hope you saw the picture too. Thank you for your kind words  

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9 posted 2001-04-15 07:06 PM


I will be a dream Columbus

I love the idea of this poem...very well done!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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10 posted 2001-04-15 10:38 PM


Becka, this is lovely, what nice thoughts put to pen. And a perfect bedtime story.
Sandra

Beckalini
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11 posted 2001-04-16 07:46 AM


JLR - Thanks very much for stopping in and letting me know what you thought.  

Sandra - Your kind words are very much appreciated. Thank you  

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