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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-04-13 07:01 PM


A small Italian restaurant
Is the setting for the night
A bottle of Lambrusco
Should start the night off right

Bruschetta and fettucine
Will be the choice I'll make for two
We don't need to worry about dessert
For that's strictly between me and you

A red & white checked tablecloth
With a smouldering candlelight
Makes the mood for our evening
Such a romantic's delight

As we clink our glasses
And toast to a wonderful night
We are serenaded in an atmosphere
That, for lovers, just feels so right

Holding hands across the table
In the candlelight we stare
And for just one fleeting moment
It feels like we're the only ones there

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kay
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1 posted 2001-04-13 09:25 PM


you forgot closing time and the owner knows you and so the feeling is so cozy...ooooh I love it
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2 posted 2001-04-13 10:51 PM


"Closing time...alright you two love birds, out the door with ya!"  I loved this, Sue.  Very romantic and to me, candles are always a nice touch, my friend.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

RMW
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3 posted 2001-04-14 01:06 AM


Suetang...now this is romantic. Well done. Bob
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