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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-04-13 04:01 PM


I've seen more than a few requests for "romance"
over the past couple of days.

here's a suggestion,
which i actually did,
some years back.

i'm even weirder now, just wait...he he he!


opinions?
+++
i phone you at work,
"stop by later, bye."
hang up quick and don't answer again.

no time to decline,
and curiousity piqued.
rent smoke machine,
i'll explain later.

meanwhile, collect the things you love to eat,
create a treasure in food.
all your favorites,
and simmer on low.

you said once,
"i like you in black, it's sexy."
oh really?
head to toe.

doorbell.
smoke on!
music wafts in the dark,
as smoke fills the room.

"the door's open, i'm downstairs."
you see the smoke and call out,
"is the house on fire?"
i chuckle, "not yet..."

music up, i drift from the smoke like karloff
and tell my eyes to burn.
a bow, a kiss on the back of your hand,
"milady, may i have this dance?"

then i sweep you away into the clouds to dance on air.

we never get around to the food.
it burns,
but so do we...

© Copyright 2001 Tom - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-13 04:03 PM


Oh, this will be snapped up!
helen smith
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2 posted 2001-04-13 08:16 PM


Oh    yes
Sven
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3 posted 2001-04-13 08:18 PM


lol. . . you think that you're strange??

excellent. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kay
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4 posted 2001-04-13 09:10 PM


Now, I truly liked this...yes I did
Beckalini
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5 posted 2001-04-13 09:16 PM


Heh heh...this is fantastic! Loved it!  
~Becky~

inot2B
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6 posted 2001-04-13 10:13 PM


I wonder how many firefighters out there will be braking down doors only to find
two hot lovers.

suthern
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7 posted 2001-04-16 04:42 PM


How could I resist this title? LOL. Trouble is, when I ask for romance, I'm burned at the stake! *G* Enjoyed this, PC. *S*
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-04-16 05:02 PM


then i sweep you away into the clouds to dance on air.

we never get around to the food.
it burns,
but so do we...


cute, I could picture it all  

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



PoemCrazy
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9 posted 2001-04-17 03:05 PM


hi!

thanks for the responses everybody.

and to the ones i addressed in the title - see?

i don't think i've ever got more than
maybe 3 responses before, hmmm...an idea germinates...tom

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