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0 posted 2001-04-13 12:56 PM


For my wife Helen,  (1slick_lady)
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Beauty Sleeping

As I watch you sleeping there in the bed,
So beautiful you look, that picture in my head.

Peaceful and quiet, the look on your face,
Always have such poise and have such grace.

Wondering about your thoughts and dreams,
Your emitting the rays of sunshine beams.

Wanting to touch you, in this place that you seem to be,
Dare not wake you, cause you’re so beautiful to me.

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Bernie



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1 posted 2001-04-13 06:17 PM


sorry ..wandered into your  bedroom     Bernie ..I will tiptoe out           ssshhhhh
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2 posted 2001-04-13 06:18 PM


me too...ssshhhhh...tip toeing - took my shoes off...but I bet she likes this a bunch.
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3 posted 2001-04-13 10:58 PM


there sleeping in your bed
is a woman hair of red
now with this poem that you write
has filled me with such delight
you thinking i'm a beauty as i dream
must be the reason that i beam

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


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4 posted 2001-04-13 11:13 PM


Ah helen,
thank you for reading, i to was being very quiet while writing this, and watching her sleep this morning.

Panne,
thank you for reading also, careful when you take off you shoes, no carpet all tiles.... guess once you have read her reply, it says it all.

For my wife,
I am so glad you liked this, and it is your bed too, by the way.  I am so happy you liked it.  As i spent about 45 minutes watching you sleep and writing this morning. But then again i have watched you sleeping a lot over the last 23yrs.
I Love You.

Bernie

A smile a day keep the world in  's.
So everyone here  .

Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2001-04-13 11:43 PM


I didn't see a thing...ok, I paused once to listen.  Great write!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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6 posted 2001-04-14 01:27 AM


I really love the whole scenario       Bernie  ,,,,actually I  think  I saw helen peeping at you  while you were peeping at her  and  JLR was peeping at all of us
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7 posted 2001-04-14 01:57 AM


This was just lovely...your absolute best!
Your heart spoke volumes in this--and translated...pure poetry!~

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8 posted 2001-04-14 02:27 AM


JLR,
Ah go ahead open your eyes, but she isn't very loud when she is sleeping.

Helen,
Yep, she does that every once in a while, and i think she's going to say quit watching me, but she's really still sleeping.. but i bet jlr's eyes were wide awake..lol

serenity,
thank you, thank you, thank you. i am try'g. opps still can not get this speelllling thing down just yet...lol
must be time to do shots......

Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world in   's.
          


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9 posted 2001-04-18 04:24 PM


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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