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OH Check out this Afternoon!
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OH Check out this Afternoon! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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OH Check out this Afternoon! Isn’t it delightful this day so bright and clear somewhere it may be raining but for a fact, please hear that though it may be gray out there in your heart, see the Shine! knowing that you’re someone’s love and someone calls you “mine!” O what an afternoon it’s calling for some bright it was so very long and dark just hours before, the night ~ but now the springs are welling flowers peeking from their dwelling rabbits rampant in the sun not the only ones to have some fun! O glorious day, favoring rays freckles peeking, lovebirds seeking glancing chances for romances and little larks there in the park… from south to north, and east to west spring has sprung forth its very best and so I have to ask, you see… if you’re enjoying this afternoon with me! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"but now the springs are welling flowers peeking from their dwelling rabbits rampant in the sun not the only ones to have some fun!" And the answer is ... YES!!!!! Whooohoooo, oh it's just so wonderful out there today Karilea, and this poem just so beautifully wraps up my feelings too, excellent writing my friend! We've just finished transplanting 6 big cedars, and are wiped, but, now we plan to go back out, and enjoy, enjoy, enjoy!!! Happy Easter, Happy Spring!!!  Best wishes and thank you for this lovely read!  /Kit |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i wasn't but i will now. and for the first verse, still wondering here on this quoted lines... "knowing that you’re someone’s love and someone calls you “mine!”" I am still not knowing. Bernie a smile a day keeps the world in 's.Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, Puck seeing the 'Sunshine' came out to play, Oh how truly YOU this is. Utterly fabulous love, and I miss you too, every day, is a I miss Kari day. This is heading into the file marked Kari's finest, the fact that all yours are fine and superb is strictly coincidental. Love your work dear heart, you keep my spirit bob bobbing along. Love and warm stuff always Puck  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
It was cloudy and drizzle this morning, but you are so right, this afternoon the sun is shining. Loved your upbeat poem. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Now this was a real pick me up, Sunshine! It's been dreary here for the past few days. Just the perky boost that I've needed! Thankies! *smiles* -Tier |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This just fits the beautiful bright sun here today Sunshine. I adored this, it's such a pick me up!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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