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One Umbrella
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One Umbrella |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
One Umbrella The scent of summer rain. Smiles exchanged As two stand waiting for a bus. The marvelous "plump" that came As suddenly circumference Meant something. RMW |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RMW~ Wonderful images pop into the mind with this one. Well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
RMW, Love the short, pictorial poem. Like the way you've done this. Kraw' /:-}== |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
What a wonderful picture. I could see this as a charming painting.
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, yes, Bob! This is one of my very favorites of yours, the "plump" is so awesome! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so GREAT! |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
awwwwwww as I squeezed in under I felt what you meant .. it's lovely |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This brings to mind an old song...about falling in love while sharing an umbrella...thanks for the music |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Wonderful, fresh imagery, Bob. You pen them so well! Cor |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Marge...thank you. Kraw...appreciate your reading. Just A Woman ...thank you very much. Virginia...nice of you to remember. Sunshine...very kind. Thank you. Helen....smiling. Paula...And you are very welcome. Corinne...Thanks, Corinne. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RMW~ Found this adorable graphic and couldn't resist the chance to come back in and pop this one back to the top !  It just seemed to say, "Plump!"  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Marge...such a sweetheart....smiling. And such a sound..."plump" upon opening. Thanks. Bob |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This is truly fabulous and I love it, this really is soooooo superb. Wonderful, and I love Margie girls umberella too. Really excellent work Take care love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RMW - few words, much meaning to be pondered. BC |
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