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0 posted 2001-04-13 12:36 PM


the hour is early
very...very...very soon
sun shall rise again

sweet were your night dreams
sweet, quite sweet, last of moon's beams
lest no nightmares come

now, quiet, listen
sweet the cardinal shall sing
let the beauty ring

and in the morn's light
wake me softly, O please do
sing one in morn's light

in a light caress
I shall rise with sunlight's best
looking back t'ward west

heros no longer
neither are role models good
I am now alone

sorrows should be gone
lamplight's reflections long past
in the looking glass

a good morning song
in some places, won't belong
take me in, will you?

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-13 01:11 AM


Good morning, Karilea.   Lovely imagery to face a new day with.  Thank you for this.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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2 posted 2001-04-13 01:12 AM


absolutely lovely....

.......and good morning to you...

it's always morning lately... lol... haven't slept a wink in days *wink*

oh... there goes one now!! gotta go catch it...

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3 posted 2001-04-13 03:52 AM


Sunshiny girl you have all the light you need and and you share it with us...thanks
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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4 posted 2001-04-13 05:08 AM


Good morning...I am still awake though - lol, and you always bring sunshine into the darkness outside right now!  Thank you.
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5 posted 2001-04-13 07:42 AM


A lovely piece to start my day
Thank you
Liz

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6 posted 2001-04-13 09:28 AM


and in the morn's light
wake me softly, O please do
sing one in morn's light

in a light caress
I shall rise with sunlight's best
looking back t'ward west

heros no longer
neither are role models good
I am now alone

sorrows should be gone
lamplight's reflections long past
in the looking glass

a good morning song
in some places, won't belong
take me in, will you?
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Good morning Sun ...(oh how you live up to thy name)  
thank you for this.

Every moment of every day
youre still with me in every way
Every poem and song...every rhyme and verse
youre still here...like a beautiful curse

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7 posted 2001-04-13 09:54 AM


Good morning Sunshine.  Think they should write a song with those lyrics:-)

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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8 posted 2001-04-13 10:19 AM


Good morning Sunshine....thanks for shining a little light on me.
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9 posted 2001-04-13 10:21 AM


It is a lovely morning Sunshine, Thank you!
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10 posted 2001-04-13 11:47 AM


Top o' the morning Sunshine ... a wonderful lift to a new day

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11 posted 2001-04-13 02:14 PM


well, Good Morning or afternoon depending on where you are!  I enjoyed this - it sounded like a soft lullaby. Thank you.

Kay
"when the going gets tough, the tough get going."

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