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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-04-13 12:29 PM










sWords>>>>


Crucifying words
insinuations that wound
leaves my heart bleeding


~*Senryu*~

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
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Blackdrake
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1 posted 2001-04-13 12:41 PM


Wonderful , short simple , and yet insightfull and comforting .  

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~



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2 posted 2001-04-13 12:49 PM


Agree with blackdrake..
Bernie
a smile a day keep the world in  's..

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3 posted 2001-04-13 01:24 AM


I'm sure a lot of us can relate to this one.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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4 posted 2001-04-14 12:05 PM


ooooo...that was so clever!  
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5 posted 2001-04-14 01:59 PM


an excellent use of the word. . .

well done Koko!!

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6 posted 2001-04-14 02:53 PM


KokoStewartKoomoa -  "Crucifying words
insinuations that wound leaves my heart bleeding"

I only ask, how did you know?

BC



KokoStewartKoomoa
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7 posted 2001-04-15 01:29 AM


A big thank you to all who commented here. I hope to use the poem to be careful not to weild a sword of words at anyone. i surely have been wounded enough times to know. I am sure all people have. Just one of those things to remind me in how i conduct myself.
Mahalo,

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
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