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Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

0 posted 2001-04-13 12:25 PM

You fill my eyes with your sight
I am lost within time
My soul with yours enters flight
To pass the darkness within the night
Forever among the stars

Staring into the night we talk
Worlds pass unnoticed and forgotten
By moonlight paths we walk
Among the forrest roads we stop
To stand within a moment

The candle-light reflects your thought
As you stare intently
All your dreams come but naught
For everything you've always fought
Sliping past your reach

Betrayal stings your heart sore
As the mind wills to chance
Your form protests ever more
Years of practice whatever for
To dance in life forever

And yet you stand staring
Defiently into fate
Hoping and yet still daring
To Judge how well your faring
Leaping after your dreams

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~

[This message has been edited by Blackdrake (edited 04-13-2001).]

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-04-13 01:30 AM

"And yet you stand staring
Defiently into fate
Hoping and yet still daring
To Judge how well your faring
Leaping after your dreams"

ain't it the truth? and you have to do it, don't you?

nicely done

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-13 04:09 PM

This likes me very much, back to the top!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-04-13 06:34 PM

Sensitive but tough.
Good work, Blackdrake! I like it!

Krawdad
/:-}==
=#===

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

4 posted 2001-04-13 09:14 PM

oh, my goodness, how I lived every line....pretended it was for me.....how wonderful this was, I mean is!

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

5 posted 2001-04-13 09:20 PM

Gosh, how jealous am I!? This is beautifully penned, with amazing rhyme and rhythm. So unfair! I really did love this one

~Becky~

Blackdrake
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 83
Depends on the day :)

6 posted 2001-04-14 12:12 PM

Thank you all

you are too kind.

Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~

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