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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-12 09:59 PM



On this last page.
I write my verse.
No need to hurry,
I've got all day.
Everything I write,
just leads to you.
I find myself.
in a trance of love.
What agony, do I put myself through?
To speak of you,
while I can't have you.
No sense in doing this,
I remind myself.
And as I write,
you appear again.
One faint memory can trigger,
a chain reaction of scenes about you.
You in my dreams.
You in my arms.
You when I eat.
You when I smile.
You as I walk.
You as I write.
You are my all.
You're still my life.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-12 10:23 PM


Everything I write,
just leads to you

Do I understand this?  Of course.  Once again, loved it!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-04-12 10:27 PM


Great writing here, walker.  It's funny how sometimes regardless of the path we choose, we just keep coming to the same conclusions, isn't it?  Never easy on us though.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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