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0 posted 2001-04-12 12:56 PM



If you want fingers gentle
Through hair
Soothing with love
Kindness and care

If you want soft kisses
trailed upon skin
smoldering sweetness
that feels like sin

If you want quiet whispers
A lilting voice to hear
Tongue dangerously close
To your ear

If you want warm hands
Roaming……………all over
Knowing where to pause
Like a passionate lover

If you want your name spoken
In satisfied sigh
Guess you better be
A romantic guy………


~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-04-12 01:05 PM


Be still my heart!

I will comment later ... after my VERY, VERY cold shower.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


PoeticKnight
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2 posted 2001-04-12 01:14 PM


*L* interloper...
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-04-12 01:15 PM


Very sensual. I like this.  
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4 posted 2001-04-12 02:48 PM


Wow, was getting hot here at my place, then read the last 2 lines.
You are so right..
But i still want... but i always want.

Bernie
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Bernie Slicker


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5 posted 2001-04-12 04:00 PM


Interloper~ ....hold still...I'll wash...

PK~ ???

Brad~ glad you liked  

Bernie~ what changed in the last two lines? Aren't you romantic?  

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6 posted 2001-04-12 04:09 PM


oh, nothing changed, can be very romantic.
Went beyond hot.......here.
Bernie

Bernie Slicker

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7 posted 2001-04-12 04:11 PM


Oh....

Martini
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8 posted 2001-04-12 04:26 PM


I liked this one alot
mind if I borrow some of it and pass it on to a certain boy of mine who could use soem coaching in being romantic!  LOL

great read

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost


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9 posted 2001-04-12 05:53 PM


Wowser! I shouldn't really be reading this! Heh heh, just kiddin', but you do paint a hell of a picture gurl! Enjoyed this muchly...soon as I find a bloke, i'll let him read this. lol  
~Becky~

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Between the Lines
10 posted 2001-04-12 06:33 PM


definitely makes one smile...SEA

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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11 posted 2001-04-12 06:37 PM


Wow, SEA, this is so sensual!!  whoo hoo
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12 posted 2001-04-12 08:58 PM


did i mention i was voted Mr Romance 7 years in a row?....heh

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