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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-04-12 11:27 AM



BLOWIN’ A HOLE IN MY ZEAL
Virginia Salter

I went for a walk in the sun
wind was a blowin’, subtractin’ my fun
yet the reward in the mid of my journey
moved me little less well than a gurney
with the wind at my back
I kept up my attack
and reached a fine pizza buffet

when the eatin’ was done
of bright sun there was none
I was forced to succumb
to a walk in the gray
with a face that gave way
to the wind blowin’ me back

the chill that it brought to my head
filled me with pain and with dread
would the ear that I held
due to wind so compelled
ever be warm again?

two miles through
looking hard so for you
to save me the one mile left
I was walking for health
but in spite of myself
that wind was a blowin’
a great hole in my zeal
by the way it was makin’ me feel.

©April  5, 2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-04-12 05:45 PM


  I know that walk..boy that was a long one

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2001-04-12 07:44 PM


i love a good walk like this to yuh make me chipper
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2001-04-12 08:28 PM


I enjoyed this one, Virginia
Panne447
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since 2001-04-03
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4 posted 2001-04-13 01:32 AM


VAS, What a great title- it was the title that brought me in. The piece reflected the title. Panne
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