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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-04-12 09:30 AM


Upon my mouth
Plant your breath
Lips of life
Forestalling death
And in time
With lips as one
In sight of none
There is nothing left

Upon my mouth
In darkness sent
Wreathed in love
A voice to vent
And in time
What words will come
Whispers soft, one by one
Until fallen spent

Upon my mouth
Etched there a smile
Granted by lips
Made worthwhile
And in time
When all is done
Look for the one
Whose mouth is reconciled

Upon my mouth
Your heart will be
Named a name unspoken
As it silences me
And in time
When love has won
Far from the sun
Your lips, my mouth, prophecy!



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1 posted 2001-04-12 09:36 AM


sweetened lips, surprise
bring a look of glad to eyes
a soft kiss does that


liking this very much!

SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-12 09:37 AM


                    "And in time
                    What words will come
                    Whispers soft, one by one
                    Until fallen spent"

                             


I just love that..........sighs

SEA

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3 posted 2001-04-12 12:12 PM


Oh, I love this!!  

Just sweeps me away!!

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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4 posted 2001-04-12 06:54 PM


Etchings....

this draws delightful promise....

wonderful!

Sven
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5 posted 2001-04-12 09:15 PM


the perfect kiss. . . there's nothing like it. . .

excellent PK. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
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6 posted 2001-04-14 08:30 PM


Lovely!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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