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Romance ( cinquain )
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Romance ( cinquain ) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Romance Wanted…needed For my heart's survival To keep its happy beat steady Romance ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I could use some of that romance...I'll see my sweetheart on Friday...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lost, Found romance comes 'round look quick, once lost, it's found now the beating of her heart, once lost, found |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I hope you have a wonderful weekend!!  Sunshine~ yes... thank you! ~SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Here's a new one from Ms. Romance herself *S* you seem to be flowing quite nicely with these little bits of romanticism SEA. And by the way, there are more than just words that are there for you to see into any heart. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
SEA.... If in her eyes He found the sea, Must he then soon A landsman be? RMW .......... Good luck.....and as the naval aviators say...."Good hunting". Bob |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, very nice cinquain.... can I help.  Parker |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Extremly beautiful SEA, I wish all this! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
you will get it. i believe you have it. Bernie a smile a day keeps the world in 's.Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
I just tried one of these...after reading yours and Packratmikes...they arent as easy as they look...yours is very beautiful |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So lovely, yes, this is what I need too!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PK~ thank you and yes, but those options aren't open for me RMW~ my dad was in the Navy Parker~ thank you handsome......I'll let you know Brad~ thank you very much FIBJ~ they are fun though aren't they? thank youMelissa~ let's hope we both always have it! ~SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
SEA, Nice ad (in Cinquain) -- like something you'd see in the personals of the newspaper only more poetic. Panne |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
great cinquain! Romance to keep the heart beating...great premise |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
SEA, Nice cinquain, but romance does not keep my heart steady!  Kraw' /:-}== |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Romance Giddy young dreams Fragrant and innocent Are the trojan horse of the heart Fallen ~jamie~ ps-- i c u have fallen off the wagon ( or in this case the SEAquain Ship) There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron [This message has been edited by Jamie (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
You accomplished a cinquain dream, said a lot in a short amount of space! Well done! Kay |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it makes the world go round. . . wonderful SEA. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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