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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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0 posted 2001-04-11 09:25 PM


I remember you as vividly
as the day I never met you
as one blind, I recongnize the
vibrations of your thoughts
upon the chamber walls of my heart...

The echos of your loneliness
call me home to a love
once stored away in jewel casings
for the beauty was too powerful
to roam free
but
there you are with the keys
to my soul,
reassuring me with the most
inviting smile I've never seen

careful as you open, careful...

...I'm free!

& there you are, offering me
the love we can never share
yet always will
& gratefully,
I accept...


-Tier{R.T.}
4/01


[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 04-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-11 09:32 PM


Oddly enough, I think I understand this.  Either way, I enjoyed it. Thanks.

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-04-11 09:37 PM


That's all a poet can ask! thank you, JLR...

*smiles*

-Tier

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
3 posted 2001-04-12 09:11 AM


This is lovely, Tier!

Corinne

RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

4 posted 2001-04-12 10:23 AM


R.T. ..... (And it's been some time since I last tapped those initials in comment). A lovely poem. Nice to see you out and about. Bob
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
5 posted 2001-04-12 11:40 AM


Thank you, Corrine, glad that you enjoyed...

*smiles*

Robere, How I do enjoy a comment from you! *tee-hee*

-Tier{R.T.}

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