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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-04-11 07:23 PM

To Taste of Her

by Michael

When she's close
my senses blush, hunger grows.
Soft and thick,
auburn hair dances
as she moves.

She has lovely
azure
flirting eyes
and yet,
these same eyes
look up to me sometimes
in awe.

Why is that?

Tiny hands
with long fingers
and
perfectly manicured nails.
With their touch
I find it difficult
to speak.

Barely more
than a hundred pounds,
I could lift her above my head
with one arm.
So much beauty
in
such a small form.

Her scent
is that of youth
and
flowered glens.

As she walks past
my gaze
wanders on supple curves,
delighting
in her feminine movement.

Tonight
I'll taste of her,
satisfy
my thirst and hunger.

I'll satisfy her own.

Within
the warmth
and
liquid
of our desires
I'll whisper,

I love you.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Chelsea~
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since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2001-04-11 07:27 PM

auguste,

this is so beautiful
and sensually tasteful

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-11 07:29 PM

it's a taste that you never tire of. . .

superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Beckalini
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since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

3 posted 2001-04-11 07:30 PM

You paint a beautiful picture with your words. She's a lucky lady!

~Becky~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-11 07:34 PM

Auguste....beautiful words combined with charming gestures will always equal eloquent moments....

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2001-04-11 07:53 PM

Michael, this is so lovely, this is beauty, what makes love go on from day to day, to treasure someone as a fine wine as this is portrayed reminds me of Spring.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 04-11-2001).]

elizabeth anne
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since 2001-03-29

Posts 83

6 posted 2001-04-11 09:18 PM

Oh Michael....how warm and softly erotic! My eyes are closed and I'm dreaming....

Elizabeth Anne

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-04-11 09:52 PM

Michael~
Just too, too lovely ....
Envision the sound of *sighing* here ...
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sami
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-04-11 11:24 PM

what else is there to say besides "wow"... incredible..keep up the good work..

~Sami

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

9 posted 2001-04-11 11:27 PM

Romantic and sensual....a girl can't ask for more

SEA

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2001-04-11 11:30 PM

Michael, this is pure class, style and fine writing...

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-04-11 11:50 PM

Exquisite Michael...and she is one that confirms that "big things come in small packages"!

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

12 posted 2001-04-12 01:23 AM

Michael

This was so delightfully elegant and so very sensual......thank you, Sue

Suetang

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

13 posted 2001-04-12 01:46 PM

Lovely poem... lucky lady! *S*

Martie

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California

14 posted 2001-04-12 02:26 PM

Michael--My senses blush reading this lovely poem...you do have a way with words that is very pleasing.

Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware

15 posted 2001-04-12 04:58 PM

I agree with Sven -and - You challenge me to write = I thank you

Auguste

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By the sea

16 posted 2001-04-12 06:20 PM

Chelsea,
I'm glad you found this tasteful.  That is what I was after when I wrote this piece.  Thank you.

Sven,
Yes, I also never grow tired of that taste.  Thanks for reading and for the "superb." :-)

Beckalini,
No, I'm a lucky man. :-)  Thank you.

Karilea,
I couldn't agree more.  Thank you.

Rosebud,
Yes, fine wine.  Thank you for enjoying this.

Elizabeth Anne,
Dreaming?  Uh oh!  :-)  Thanks.

Marge,
Hey, I was sighing as I wrote this.  Could ya tell?  Thank you, dear.

Sami,
Thanks for the "wow" and for reading. :-)

SEA,
Thank you.  I'm happy you enjoyed this one.

Deer,
Thank you for the "pure class" and for stopping by and having a look at this piece.  I'm glad you liked it.  :-)  Hey, I'm still smiling at "Captain Clutz."  That was wonderful.

Mysteria,
I appreciate much the "exquisite" and your visiting this poem.  :-)  Thanks

Sue,
I'm pleased you liked this one.  I was hesitant to post it, but am not glad that I did.  Thanks, my friend.

suthern,
Thank you.  Again, I am the lucky one here.  :-)

Martie,
Uh oh...didn't mean to make your senses blush. :-)  Thanks, sweetie.

Bill,
Some of the excellent poets here also challenge me to write.  Thanks much.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

17 posted 2001-04-13 07:02 AM

Very romantic and lovely
Liz

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

18 posted 2001-04-13 01:52 PM

A gentleman poet ..so nice

Kay
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19 posted 2001-04-13 09:47 PM

this is perfection !!!!!!!!

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

[This message has been edited by Kay (edited 04-13-2001).]

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

20 posted 2001-04-13 10:22 PM

Liz,
It's good to see you here.  Thank you for coming by and reading this.  I'm glad you liked this one.  Thank you.

Helen,
Thank you.  I always try to be a gentleman.  My father taught me to respect women.  Some values never become old fashioned.

Kay,
Thanks for the "perfection."  And thank you for reading.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

21 posted 2001-04-13 10:56 PM

wow..your poems (ive gone back and read a few) are just so full of feeling. they are incredible

you can almost see and feel what you are trying to say

please please keep writing and posting-id love to read more....
~Sami

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

22 posted 2001-04-13 11:05 PM

Sami,

Thank you for your sweet and generous compliments on my work. You're most welcome to visit my poetry web site at http://members.tripod.com/~augustfire/index.html and if you would, please sign my guest book while you're there, okay? Thank you, again.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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