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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


0 posted 04-11-2001 07:06 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

The truth is...
I remain unloved
I still hurt
I still cry
he still withholds

The truth is...
I have no words left
besides these.
Just sad, tired
repititious words.

I don't know yet what his truth is
or why, or if I should even care
and if it matters
and if not
why does it still hurt?

On and on, the truth
which tells me nothing
slaps me in the face
with my uninvited love
which was once so desired.

And I have nothing left
except these repititious words...
© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 04-11-2001 07:12 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

if they are true, they are worht solid gold.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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2 posted 04-11-2001 07:12 PM       View Profile for Beckalini   Email Beckalini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beckalini

Very touching write here catalinamoon, I felt your pain. But just one thing...whatever the situation, nobody is ever completely unloved, even if we think we are. Just keep that chin up, and that smile firmly in place.  
~Becky~
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3 posted 04-11-2001 07:26 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

and in these words. . . you will find healing. . .

excellent Sandra. . . you've been missed. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 04-12-2001 12:17 PM       View Profile for Passions Voice   Email Passions Voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Passions Voice

I know this feeling well.  But, the words will always have meaning.

Liked this one.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

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5 posted 04-12-2001 08:17 PM       View Profile for athena4   Email athena4   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for athena4

Sandra,
     There may be words of hope in the future.  Let your heart remain open, and look towards tomorrow...
           Love, Elise
JLR
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6 posted 04-12-2001 08:27 PM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

I can relate to every word of this.  And I like the style of it, too.
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Deep in the heart


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The truth is we're glad you're back

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 04-12-2001 08:35 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i like it i like it i like it. that was corny huh. yuh i liked it! (it's a joke about repition i am trying to make)
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Sandra.. I am having these same thoughts today..I hate to feel I am uninvited in love..huggzzz

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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(tears fall down my cheeks) This is so very sad, sweet friend, this may be the truth for now but I also know with all my heart that He has a plan for us all and that He will give you the love your heart deserves so much and that too is a truth that you will seek! (kiss on cheek) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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an incredible piece!
JamesMichael
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Nice writing...with an acceptance of the truth we can make rational decisions...James
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