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Open Poetry #13

Love Me Not

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-11 05:48 PM

Love me not
For my words of passion sweet
Others choose words as such
Letters combined randomly
And vain are words
When compared to reality

Love me not
For my looks of passing youth
Others have more beauty
Still longer keep, this is true
And all looks fade
There is no greater truth

Love me not
For money that might seem much
Others have their own horde
Their own treasure as such
And coins change hands
But can never hold, nor touch

Love me not
For habit’s sake feel must do
Others been down that road
Holding onto past that flew
Just love only
Because I love only you

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-04-11 05:52 PM

Love is much more then anything tangible. Very well written!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-11 05:53 PM

but why, then, Sir, do your words not seem like random samplings of thoughts strung together just to see us smile...and bring forth then, replies? Why is that....?

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-11-2001).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2001-04-11 05:54 PM

PK.......swoon.....i feel faint !!!! helen

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-11 06:14 PM

I have recently learned PK. . . that these are the important things. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-04-11 06:44 PM

But if your words are all I have as a way to see into your world...into your heart...then let me have them.....they mean so much to me....

SEA

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