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What one Wears
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Diaphanous silk Set on her like creamy milk She swirled Marilyn Gossamer thinking My thoughts floated along you Tickled you awake My hand soft in yours Connecting all sensations Touch my hand again Then dress me in silk I shall swirl like Marilyn While wearing your smile |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Such a dreamy roamntic feeling in this one! I love it !  |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Victoria's Secret - here I come - will probably blow the mortgage payment - but - we'll not lack for silk ~G~ - Excuse me while I get a cold shower LiW - you sure can comunicate - be it words - or silk ~S~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I must concur with my fellow poet Mr. Yeats Lady. . . this indeed does set the mind reeling. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Smiling while taking a cold shower Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
An exquisitely sensual write here. May favourite bit has to be "Tickled you awake" - adorable! Great job Lady, liked it muchly ~Becky~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Somehow the thought of you swirling in silk increases the room temperature dramatically  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SO Pretty! SEA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Swirling Marilyn...wow, one line set the entire mood (I am learning!) Great poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Such a lovely piece. You 'swirled' it splendidly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lady....you just took 5-7-5 to new heights very creative premise and take on senryu syllables.. very cool, sexy write |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o and tell me bout your dress o yuh |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Kind people....I shall send "Marilyn" your kind remarks.... while a woman who needed some sympathy for her life....she was remarkable, indeed.... thank you all for reading! |
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