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mini poet
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0 posted 2001-04-11 04:18 PM



Rain


Rain is falling everywhere

on rain-hats coats and sleeves

It's raining down on everything

and dripping off the leaves

~

The rain is pouring down so hard

that everyone stays inside

Yet I stay splashing at the park

and dripping down the slide

~~~


Jennifer

April 2001

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer E McCoy - All Rights Reserved
dreamy_eyes
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1 posted 2001-04-11 04:40 PM


I read your poem several times, and couldn't come to the conclusion whether your poem was displaying your sadness within,or if u were just talking about rain.  A great poem a pleasure to read, keep writing
Luv Debi xxx  

mini poet
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2 posted 2001-04-11 04:48 PM


I just like the rain.
I even like the thunder and lightning.
I like the fresh smell after a rain storm.

dreamy_eyes
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3 posted 2001-04-11 04:54 PM


Good jen I'm glad it isnt your sadness!

I love the rain! My friends think I'm mad because I love taking walks in the rain.  God knows why I like it but it's calm and soothing!

Luv Debi xXx  

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4 posted 2001-04-11 04:56 PM


Oh and anytime you wanna chat email me! If you want to that is

devillish_deb@hotmail.com

Luv Debi xXx  

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5 posted 2001-04-11 05:03 PM


Jennifer~   me too....I love the rain....we have some today, not as much as I'd like though....rain makes me feel so happy and excited inside..... I really liked this and I'm putting it in my library....you look to be about the same age as my girls ( they are 10 and 11)    SEA
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6 posted 2001-04-11 05:30 PM


Jennifer...."....dripping down the slide..." Been there and done that....though not for a week or two. Excellent!  Bob (a Duck)
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7 posted 2001-04-11 05:46 PM


wished the rain would come down over her It's sunny day all day enjoyed
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8 posted 2001-04-11 07:24 PM


MiniPoet~
What a delightful romp in the rain.
You make it look and sound so FUN !

Gosh, you're a cutie too !
Keep writing, young lady ...
we'll keep enjoying it.

ADORABLE graphic !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-04-11 07:32 PM


I like this very much. We've had some rain lately, which is unusual for the desert. I'm going to put this in my library and hope that in the future, if we do an all kids issue of the newsletter, that you will allow us to use it (we'll talk to one of your parents about it). Thanks!    
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10 posted 2001-04-11 09:41 PM


Thanks for reminding me of playing in the rain.  We used to build dams in the gutters and flood the whole street!!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

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