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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-04-11 03:01 PM




Heaven's Caress

Heaven
kindred beauty
decorates skin with kiss
true sensual embrace of grace
evening starlight serenades hearts ablaze
entwined souls, eternal romance
on silken wings of love
sensation of
heaven

~*By Melissa Honeybee*~

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-11 03:06 PM


I'm going to have to try this....it is wonderful.....
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2 posted 2001-04-11 03:36 PM


Melissa~
Eloquently elegant !
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-04-11 03:45 PM


Melissa you ROCK!! THis is gorgeous!    SEA
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4 posted 2001-04-11 07:05 PM


missy,

a great erotic
style

Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-04-12 01:09 PM



Karilea, Marge, Sea and Chels - thank you so much!  I think that I'm addicted to rictameters  

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6 posted 2001-04-14 02:16 AM


Oh Lissa this is just beautiful....well done
~HUGS~
Tracie~

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It is the harmony of the universe



kitkat
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7 posted 2001-04-14 08:42 AM


This was very nice. hmmm never heard of this style before, guess I will have to give it a try. Thanks for sharing.
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8 posted 2001-04-14 08:49 AM


the poem is lovely but the p icture OMG......hmmmm hmmmmm

is this what heaven is??? Let me in!!!!!!!!

Honeybee
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9 posted 2001-04-14 10:26 PM



Thank you for reading Tracie, Kit Kat and Kathleen, it was the picture that inspired the rictamater  

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10 posted 2001-04-18 06:23 PM


Lovely writing Melissa...James
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11 posted 2001-04-18 07:00 PM


Melissa...AWESOME!  Fun isn't it - find the picture then write, I do it all the time, great inspiration art.

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12 posted 2002-01-20 01:34 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever be caressed by heaven and share a love sooooooo beautiful! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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