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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-11 02:20 PM

You stir in me
A thousand echoes
Of a thousand kisses
And a thousand tomorrows

Emotions in long decay
Ever by slow degrees
Never have I felt this way
You move me

You unlock in me
So much of desire
So much pain
In which we conspire

Memories betray innocence
Ever by slow degrees
Unafraid of the consequence
You move me

You instill in me
A taste for life renewing
A taste from depths
Of which is my undoing

Feelings long kept secret
Ever by slow degrees
Whatever it is, you do it
You move me

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-11 02:21 PM

PK...not fair, melting hearts like this....SEA will be all over this in a heart's beat!

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-04-11 03:11 PM

Nah...I don't think so sunshine.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-04-11 03:21 PM

?????What is this???? You doubt my heart???? Here it is full of such romantic notions and sighing to your words so beautiful......so moving......wishing this was for me....

SEA

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-11 06:26 PM

You should know better PK. . . Sunshine has that way of seeing. . .

this is superb. . .

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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2001-04-13 12:48 PM

Ah...wish I had written this...it's wonderful...especially this:

Feelings long kept secret
Ever by slow degrees
Whatever it is, you do it
You move me

Sigh.......

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

6 posted 2001-04-13 09:35 PM

when someone says "you move me" I love it

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

7 posted 2001-04-13 10:47 PM

Absolutely stunning! Can say no more...
~Becky~

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