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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-04-11 08:10 AM

She Loves Me She Loves Me Not

She loves me she loves me not echoes in rescind
She loves me she loves me not carries on the wind.
Butterflies feed upon the sweetness in the air
And I am left in wonderment crying out despair.

She loves me she loves me not the petals fly away
She loves me she loves me not I sit and say all day.
Birds fly within the sun and I am in the night
Feeding a string that flies a very wayward kite

She loves me she loves me not I sorrow in the call
She loves me she loves me not I cannot stop the bawl.
Flowers lay about me and shrink away my touch
They weep in morning’s dew and shy away my clutch.

She loves me she loves me not has turned into nightmare
She loves me she loves me not still floats upon the air.
I sing the words like fishing bait, without a bite reciprocate
Struck with naught but echoes fate, with nothing left but to wait.

She love me she loves me not is the essence of this rhyme.
She loves me she loves me not has ever circled thru out time.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-11 08:41 AM

I will continue to give you daisies for plucking poetic purposes if you would continue to write sweet poetic verses....

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-11 09:00 AM

Well done! Smooth read. I like very much.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-04-11 09:13 AM

Sunshine,
Send the daisies. *L*

Interloper,
Thanks for the like.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-04-11 09:23 AM

I think anyone who didn't love you would be crazy........

this makes me want to get you more flowers too....ones that will end in she loves me

SEA

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-04-11 10:11 AM

Pluck till you get the answer you want

(ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)
*winkiewinkie*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-04-11 10:44 AM

Sea,
I'll take all the flowers I can get, thanks.

JM,
ohhowIlovewhenYOUwritelikethis. Thanks for the daisies. Winkiewinkie Stinky

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-11 12:56 PM

and hopefully ends as. . . she loves me. . .

excellent Sy. . .

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-04-11 12:58 PM

Thank you my friend Sven.

Marge Tindal

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9 posted 2001-04-12 08:22 PM

Seymour~
Of COURSE she loves you ...
Heck, we ALL love you !

I loved your pretty petaled phrases !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

10 posted 2001-04-12 10:33 PM

This is so YOU, Sy!

This piece, she's perfecto.

Cor

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2001-04-13 03:39 PM

Marge,
Love your pretty words.*L*

Corinne,
Not exactly the daisies didn't think so. LOL

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