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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-04-11 01:54 AM



When I talk back,
I recover my might,
My pride I decide
Won’t sit on the side,

I defend my ground
Like a solider in battle,
I ravage them like cattle’s,

I say things that make no sense,
It is if devil has me
In his crushing trance.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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1 posted 2001-04-11 02:29 AM


Yes sometimes it is easier to say things than it is to recall the words.  Be careful. Love Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-11 04:01 PM


When the words are learnt to memory the sense flows easier, learning is adventure, better to practise when safe & steer clear of possible violent confrontations is my guess.

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3 posted 2001-04-12 03:08 AM


Thanks you for sharing your thoughts.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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