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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-04-11 01:30 AM



Waxing Memories

~*Marge Tindal*~

candles flickering
shadows casting
silhouettes graffiti
dance reminisced
candles burning
you returning
waxing memories
memories waxing
returning you
burning candles
reminisced dance
graffiti silhouettes
casting shadows
flickering candles



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-04-11 01:33 AM



Marge-
Oh, how i love candles...and how
i love this poem..   
Absolutely beautiful...

love ya,
vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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2 posted 2001-04-11 01:38 AM


A very creative way of presenting the poem. You have taken it to a new level. Quite lovely.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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3 posted 2001-04-11 02:06 AM


This is the work of an artist.  Beautiful
Joyce

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4 posted 2001-04-11 09:59 AM


Ah Marge....you made me remember this....
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so of course I'm smiling now....


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-04-11 08:19 PM


Vicky~
Ahhh !  We share the love for candles.
Thank you for the mid-night read.

Xeonox~
And I thank you for thinking so.

Joyce~
What a very nice thing to say.
I appreciate it so much.

Karilea~
I wouldn't even have to peek to know that
it must be your 'Carnaubian' piece ...
YES !  I was right !
Sooooooooo lovely and still I 'understand' it well.
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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6 posted 2001-04-12 06:34 AM


~HUGS~ margie you've done it again  
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-04-12 07:50 AM


Tracie~
So nice of you to set an early morning smile on my face.
You're such a loyal sweetie.
Thank you for being here.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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