Open Poetry #13 |
Rain, Glorious Rain |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Rain, Glorious Rain! Virginia Salter rain, rain, glorious rain singin’ rain dancin’ rain dripping from the eaves splashin’ hard and high springin’ from the spider webs showerin’ a fly music for the earth swelling up the birth of buds and blossoms frogs and ‘possums fillin’ me with mirth falling to the land drivin’ to the sea spinnin’ cartwheels in my brain dressin’ me with glee rivulets and rills flowin’ through the hills down, down on through town over rocks they spill bringin’ wet t’ seeds and roots sprinklin’ up those high top boots landin’ on all lads and lasses spottin’ up m’ grampa’s glasses an’ sendin’ me for tea © April 10, 2001 |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ I love rain and this made me smile....very nicely done! SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Virginia~ Wonderful write! This has a whimsical flow and rhyme to it! I love the soothing beat of rain, thank you for sharing~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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painted lady Junior Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 48on the wing or nectaring |
"springin' from the spider webs and showerin' a fly" Love this VAS! It's rainin' here and this fits right in... A fun read! Thank you. pl And then my heart with pleasure fills, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sometimes the rain is so welcome...James |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The land here needs the rain so badly, but now, in the 13th hour of rain, I'm ready for some let up so I can work in the yard that's been freshened well with showers. It's not soggy yet, though, so I guess I'd better not complain. Gettin' stuff done inside, at least, because of it. Thanks all, for reading and your kind and wonderful comments. |
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