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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-10 03:50 PM

Held in Your Hands

one day,
it might happen
that you behold me soft,
tenderly caressing each white
thought of me, embracing me
in timeless time, in a
moment’s breath,
in your book of
poetry

~*~

in gold gilt splendor
thoughts, dreams, moments surrendered
between covers, mine

~*~

soft come words of write
magical nights, mystic days
a reader’s delight

~*~

to be held in hands
eyes touching every word
sounds that go unheard

~*~

one day,
it might happen
that you behold me soft,
tenderly caressing each white
thought of me, embracing me
in timeless time, in a
moment’s breath,
in your book of
poetry

~*~

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-10 04:10 PM

Lady~ this is fantabulous!! Beautiful

SEA

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-10 05:06 PM

Passionate, carnal, breathtaking.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-10 08:41 PM

we all should be held as such. . .

wonderful Lady. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-10 09:11 PM

Very tender thoughts in this one.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2001-04-10 10:54 PM

One could only dream......

What a beautiful poem and presentation...

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-04-10 11:10 PM

You are all so very kind with your comments...thank you...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-04-10 11:56 PM

one day,
it might happen
that you behold me soft,
tenderly caressing each white
thought of me, embracing me
in timeless time, in a
moment’s breath,
in your book of
poetry

~*~

in gold gilt splendor
thoughts, dreams, moments surrendered
between covers, mine
====================

oh this is divine...for both the eyes and mind...
very well done dear Lady of the white

baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found ...
it will all be gone when you turn around ...
cuz, nothing lasts forever anyway ...

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

8 posted 2001-04-11 09:14 AM

Caressing you...yes, I think so.

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

9 posted 2001-04-11 10:31 AM

I've totally run out of explitives -sufficient to express - how important it is for me to have your poems to read -
That's how it is - and how it appears it ever shall be -
I can only express my most grateful 'thanks'

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

10 posted 2001-04-11 10:33 AM

Magic - pure magic - It continues to work on me ~S~ - For God's sake - please keep writing

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