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Keith
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since 2001-04-10
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0 posted 2001-04-10 02:03 PM


do you spy?
"said the guy" that is going to die
are you?
you're probably not
going to die
the end of the end
is the end of the end of
                               this poem.


(I am PoeticaL's 8 year old son.  Thanks yous to inot2B, Paula Finn, dgvarner, VAS, Brad Majors, Mysteria, Elizabeth Santos for reading and replying to my post when my Mommy did it.  Apparently Mommy's not allowed to post for me.  Sorry, had to repost it myself...with Mommy's complete help.  I'm 8 and I'm just confused now.  Thanks, Keith!)


© Copyright 2001 Keith - All Rights Reserved
PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
Posts 50

1 posted 2001-04-10 02:17 PM


I love it!  But I'm biased.  And proud.  Wonder do they have Typing 101 for 2nd graders?  hmmm....

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-04-10 03:11 PM


Just give Keith some free rein over your keyboard, and I'll bet he'll pick it up in no time!  I know my 8 year old granddaughter hunts and pecks on mine, and I keep her stories on my computer for her!

Keith, welcome to Passions!  Check your Mom's e-mail, with her permission, for a very special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-04-10 07:34 PM


Welcome to our family Keith!! I really liked your poem. I hope you continue to post here, we need all the good poets we can get!

I also hope you'll let us know if you have any questions - we'll definitely try to answer them.

I'm going to put your poem in my 'library' and hope that you will allow us to use it in our ALL KIDS newsletter issue in a few months.    Would that be ok?

Again, welcome to the family!!!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-04-10 08:13 PM


Nice poem, Keith!!  I think you have talent here and I hope you keep writing to develop it more.  

Welcome!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-04-10 08:16 PM


I read your lovely poem, Keith and I hope you write some more.  Love  Joyce
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2001-04-11 06:44 AM


Welcome to Passions Keith!  I hope you continue to write and post, we'd love to read more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2001-04-12 06:23 AM


Hi Keith ...

Welcome to our growing Kid-Passions world... You're in good company.  We also have AliciaRose (doreen's daughter, who's about the same age as you) - mini poet(Jennifer - Rex Allen McCoy's daughter) - and Mikey (Michael Anderson's son)... Any more kids want to be accounted for here?

We LOVE having kids join us - I think your work is great, and I hope you write lots lots more for us...



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