Open Poetry #13 |
The Guy Who Died |
Keith New Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 1 |
do you spy? "said the guy" that is going to die are you? you're probably not going to die the end of the end is the end of the end of this poem. (I am PoeticaL's 8 year old son. Thanks yous to inot2B, Paula Finn, dgvarner, VAS, Brad Majors, Mysteria, Elizabeth Santos for reading and replying to my post when my Mommy did it. Apparently Mommy's not allowed to post for me. Sorry, had to repost it myself...with Mommy's complete help. I'm 8 and I'm just confused now. Thanks, Keith!) |
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PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
I love it! But I'm biased. And proud. Wonder do they have Typing 101 for 2nd graders? hmmm.... "I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just give Keith some free rein over your keyboard, and I'll bet he'll pick it up in no time! I know my 8 year old granddaughter hunts and pecks on mine, and I keep her stories on my computer for her! Keith, welcome to Passions! Check your Mom's e-mail, with her permission, for a very special message! Karilea |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family Keith!! I really liked your poem. I hope you continue to post here, we need all the good poets we can get! I also hope you'll let us know if you have any questions - we'll definitely try to answer them. I'm going to put your poem in my 'library' and hope that you will allow us to use it in our ALL KIDS newsletter issue in a few months. Would that be ok? Again, welcome to the family!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice poem, Keith!! I think you have talent here and I hope you keep writing to develop it more. Welcome!! All writing comes |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I read your lovely poem, Keith and I hope you write some more. Love Joyce |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Keith! I hope you continue to write and post, we'd love to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hi Keith ... Welcome to our growing Kid-Passions world... You're in good company. We also have AliciaRose (doreen's daughter, who's about the same age as you) - mini poet(Jennifer - Rex Allen McCoy's daughter) - and Mikey (Michael Anderson's son)... Any more kids want to be accounted for here? We LOVE having kids join us - I think your work is great, and I hope you write lots lots more for us... |
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