Open Poetry #13 |
He Spoke .......... [inspired by Auguste] |
Sunshine
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He Spoke “of meadows sprinkled in fragrant wildflowers with forests filtering crimson sunsets” and transformed was I to a glen in green, yellow and young blue sparklings early spring delights, scents of grasses growing and that special spring mist that only the purest breezes blow I stayed in the glen to breathe in the warmth of the day smelling pungent ground moved by worms in my stay I delighted in the sun of your day, felt the warmth saturate my shoulders warming my legs encased in black jeans pulling in the sun lifting my face to the sky freckles popping in the silence smelling feeling holding in nature surrounded in His love and knowing, realizing laughing, in gay delight the thought of being surrounded by poets… nature’s delight today, I shall stay in the warmth of the glen and love |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Such a nice place to be. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karilea, That some simple poem I wrote could inspire something of such incredible loveliness is just amazing. This takes my breath away. I love this and am deeply touched and honored. Thank you, sweet poet friend. Michael Proust- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . simply wonderful. . . *sigh*. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
Simply wonderful....and what a great inspiration to have! Elizabeth Anne |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"lifting my face to the sky freckles popping in the silence" and man they pop out ALL over my face I loved this Sunshine! SEA |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This is beautiful and inspired by such...both of you inspire me! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I swear there is some 'irish' in you. - yet this is much much more than blarney or celtic meadows - or anything Auguste (no disrespect intended) could ever produce |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely indeed. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 04-14-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Lovely thoughts and certainly inspired by a man of gentle thoughts ... You both are amazingly delightful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Don't you all just love it when one poet inspires another? Thank you all for reading! |
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