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Open Poetry #13

Senryu [blame RMW]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-10 09:35 AM

Slip silently slid
Thundering acquiescence
Soft into the night

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-10 09:37 AM

Sunshine~ this is so pretty

SEA

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

2 posted 2001-04-10 10:29 AM

"Thundering acquiescence"
I cannot think of 2 more powerful words combined -

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-10 04:21 PM

Karilea, I cannot think of anybody who can put directly opposing thoughts and meanings together and make it crystal clear any better than you. The juxtapositional verse is masterful.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-10 04:35 PM

I too join the bandwagon in applauding your word usuage. Astonishing results!

"I am not now that which I have been."

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