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wandering
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0 posted 2001-04-10 09:30 AM


To have never known
A sweet love to share
Neither one of us crossed that line,
Never dared

To never share
Of what dreams are made
We watch them wisp away
Into twilight fade

To never embrace
Into arms of warm
Nothing to safely cradle
A feeling newly born

To never have kissed
With passions true fire
Just turn away
Ignore desire

To never give our hearts
To where they do belong
Never say I said
That it was wrong

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

© Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-04-10 09:40 AM


Oh this aches....and makes me think of the one I never dared to cross the line with...I'll always wish I did......loved this    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-10 08:43 PM


there will always be. . . lost times. . .

excellent my friend. . .  

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Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-04-10 08:59 PM


I think we have all been there at one time or another and lost that chance forever.  Wonderful reminder that we should seize the day and not let those golden opportunies slip by the wayside.  Well done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-04-11 12:48 PM


To never share
Of what dreams are made
We watch them wisp away
Into twilight fade

To never embrace
Into arms of warm
Nothing to safely cradle
A feeling newly born
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the regret and the "what ifs" ...they will always linger.
tender, sincere write...
wonderful cadence, rhyme choices and imagery
well done poet sir

baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found ...
it will all be gone when you turn around ...
cuz, nothing lasts forever anyway ...

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2001-04-11 02:54 AM


One can always wonder about the step not taken.  Joyce
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