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Kethry
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0 posted 2001-04-10 09:21 AM




Brother sun
Sister moon
Coupled
Together
Since the dawn of time
Reflections
of the other
images seen in tandem
shadow and light
two sides of the
same coin
two facets
of the same space
Without one
The other does not survive
Without the other
The first has no
Variance
Twin radiance's
Orbed in beauty
In order
To reveal
the face of God


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



© Copyright 2001 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-04-10 09:52 AM


Oh Kethry...this is goregous!    SEA
Kethry
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2 posted 2001-04-10 10:43 AM


Thanks SEA,
I haven't written much lately so this was a nice surprise for me.
Keth.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-04-10 12:44 PM


Simply beautiful!  
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4 posted 2001-04-10 12:45 PM


A nice surprise for us, too, Keth...welcome home!
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5 posted 2001-04-10 12:52 PM


this is great Kethry. . . a perfect addition to our little series. . . I'll be back. . .  

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Marsha
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6 posted 2001-04-10 03:59 PM


Kethry sister of my heart, this is outstandingly beautiful, how utterly utterly fabulous. Always absolutely always your sheer amazing talent shines through. Oh how I love these Brother Sun Sister Moon series, you and AD are just soooooooo utterly perfect at them.

You know I love this one don't you dearest sister, truly fabulous work

Take care love as always
and lots of warm slushy stuff
thanks for the Easter gift love I really loved it
            be good
               but not too good
                  Slushy
                  
          

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Panne447
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7 posted 2001-04-10 04:01 PM


Kethry, Nice read. Very nice. Panne
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8 posted 2001-04-10 07:40 PM


Kethry~
This is perfectly lovely !
Wonderfully, wonderfully written.

'two facets
of the same space'


I just love that thought !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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