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Wind Dancer
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Wind Dancer ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ Swirling and twirling catching a gentle breeze Softest feathered movement through the weeping willow trees Fluttering wings of the cooing dove glide in gentle slide upon a face in love Dance across a mountain-dip into the sea blow your gentle breezes swiftly home to me When the wind so fairly dances across the land all things are caressed by God's own gentle hand ~And they call the wind ~Mysteria Thank you for this inspiration~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! You got out your crayons again didn't you? My, the colors are all inside the lines too! Simply lovely, and I am not sure how I inspired this, but I shall keep it up if this is what happens! Beautiful! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, A very sweet poem. May I have this dance?  Michael Proust- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Oh Oh! I love it when one poet inspires another so colorfully! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So lovely and wonderful Marge! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Needless to say this wind blew right through my heart. Wonderfully inspired writing. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is utterly beautiful, truly I'm speachless I love it and it's soooooooo you fabulous dear heart love and warm stuff Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, your words are so beatuiful and powerful. I enjoy everything you write, and this is no exception. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful dance across the wind, so lovely Marge, your words... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Might have been those 'long-winded' e-mails ! LOL !  Silly girl ... 'Tempest' did it for me ! SO THERE !  Michael~ Indeed you may !  Karilea~ Oh, me too ! Melissa~ Thanks, hon. Julian~ Thank you for letting me know. Marsha~ LOL ! YOU ??? SPEECHLESS ??? LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL! *hugs* n' *giggles* LoveBug~ Awww ! Thank you, honey. GreenEyes~ Thank you for letting me know it danced for you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ this is beautiful....feels so soft SEA |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, again you have painted a wonderful picture with your vivid words. Oh so lovely. Hugs ME |
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mini poet Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 56Canada |
I like your poem Marge. It's really nice. Sometimes I wonder about the wind and where it came from, and who might have taken the last breath of the same air that I breath. :^) Jenn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ It blew softly across my mind~ I'm glad you could feel that. Thank you. MotherEarth~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. MiniPoet~ Thank you, Jenn. Good ponders on your part ... Maybe you'd care to write a little something on the wind ?? ~*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl this is just too wonderful to let slip down the page. (Is this a resurection of Bev de Bump, no it's just me, doing Bev de Bumps work) Well, you know after she died so tragically young, I have to do something to recall her to memory. Truly utterly outstanding, I did tell you that this is tres bon, didn't I? Of course Take care love and warm stuff Mushy Feeling a little puckish  you know hugs and love to you oh sparkly one.You knew I'd love this didn't you of course you did xxxx Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ You are such a love ... give Bev de Bump a special *hug* from me !  You ARE 'puck' ... Tee-Hee ! Love ya', gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title enchanted me... and the poem delighted. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ Don't ya' just love that enchantment ? You're a sweetie and I thank you for the read. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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