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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-10 01:40 AM

I'm on the wane
diminishing
I'm refrained
I pull the sea
and all the tides
are at my whim
I am sustained
in Luna's Hymn...
I am the cycles of the moon...
I am the humming of the tune.

I am Orb upon the wax,
the fullness of the fish tide tax
and mysteries of fishman's dull
to know he is a part of all
and to love her in full light
and keep her always
in his sight
Lunacy of lover's plight--
to wax- to wane- to love sustain...
in dread of loveless Luna's might.
in knowledge of the stead of friend
to know her and to love again.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 04-10-2001).]

painted lady
Junior Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 48
on the wing or nectaring

1 posted 2001-04-10 01:57 AM

Everybody writes about the Moon, but not everybody does it like this. . . and launched in first person no less. The personification of nature has many interesting possibilities.
pl

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils. Wm Wordsworth (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-04-10 02:39 AM

SweetSerenity~
You are captured in the full blush of moon~
Alluring ...
Luna Lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-04-10 03:42 AM

serenity,

Wow! This is amazing writing. Thank you.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2001-04-10 06:12 AM

Seren sweetie this is just awesome, your muse under the moon is pure delight.
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:06 AM

Serenity~

this is wonderful...love the fact that you put fishermen in this...(have a weak spot for them) I enjoyed this very much.

SEA

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

6 posted 2001-04-10 09:52 AM

This was beautifully done...loved it

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-04-10 09:58 AM

I'm on the wane
diminishing
I'm refrained
I pull the sea
and all the tides
are at my whim
I am sustained
in Luna's Hymn...
I am the cycles of the moon...
I am the humming of the tune.

... you better kiss me ... cause you're gonna miss me ... when I'm gone ...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-10 01:02 PM

shine on again Luna fair
for we know that your rays
reach even the coldest of hearts. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-04-11 06:58 PM

S, this is really well done. Perfect for this moon lover..
Sandra

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-04-11 07:07 PM

serenity,

a creative poem,
i have always been
fascinated by the
mysterious moon

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