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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-04-10 01:00 AM



Hello, I Love You
~*One Lucky Mom*~

"Hello, I love you."
The words rang soft today,
"Just wanted you to know.
That's all I called to say."

As if that was not enough ...

"Oh, one more thing ...
thanks for being my mom."



© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2001-04-10 01:04 AM


the greatest gift from a child.....beautiful....helen
painted lady
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2 posted 2001-04-10 01:34 AM


Make your day or what?
Thanks for sharing this small, but large part of life.

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.          Wm Wordsworth  (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

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3 posted 2001-04-10 03:47 AM


It is a pebble that becomes a mountain, and you write it so well!
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4 posted 2001-04-10 04:02 AM


This one has me beaming Marge   Wonderful!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


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5 posted 2001-04-10 06:06 AM


Oh Margie girl this is just shining with love this one....you're one proud mum and so you should be.
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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6 posted 2001-04-10 08:43 AM


The smile here on my face should say all I need to say about this one  

~ Ruth
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7 posted 2001-04-10 08:56 AM


Margie girl, I love this one, outstanding and I just called to say I love you too.

I Love love love it

truly first class work love

Love and warm stuff  
                  Mushy
                  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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8 posted 2001-04-10 09:08 AM


Marge~ I do that to my Mom too   I hope someday my kids call for that same reason!    SEA
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9 posted 2001-04-10 09:19 AM


Count your blessings...some kids just call for money!  Loved this.
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10 posted 2001-04-10 04:50 PM


Sucha phone call is this! You must have done a whole bunch of somethings right.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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11 posted 2001-04-10 05:33 PM


indeed a lucky mom, to hear those precious words from our precious children...very special Marge...


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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12 posted 2001-04-10 06:29 PM



Awwww, Margie you made me   I try to tell my mom that I love her as much as I can! Yeppers, you're one lucky mom!~

Take care,
Melissa~

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13 posted 2001-04-10 06:47 PM


So simple but full of feeling. Just the ticket! Loved this one. And not only are you a lucky Mum, but I'm guessing the person on the end of the line feels pretty lucky to have you as a mum. If we kids make our mum's feel lucky, it's only because we feel lucky enough to be able to make you feel that way too...if that makes sense!? Either way, you're lucky to have each other. Great write  
~Becky~

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14 posted 2001-04-10 07:28 PM


Marge--Just a few words say so much, thank you for reminding me.  I love you too!
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15 posted 2001-04-10 07:53 PM


Marge,
That said it all. Lovely

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16 posted 2001-04-10 08:24 PM



Marge-
  such beautiful words...
  you've put a great big smile
  on this face..     
  thanks for the important reminder...

  love you,
  vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2001-04-11 07:59 AM


*Thank you ALL for sharing the joy of this mom's heart !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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