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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-04-09 11:13 PM



Silent Twilight Pause
  ~*Marge Tindal*~  
    
Just before the turn of evening
After the setting of the sun
In that moment of silent twilight pause
when we become aware of the parting hour
You turn and catch me mid-sentence ...
Shhh ! ... a fingertip trace across my lips
Your half-smile of longing begs me stay
I am torn with tender reluctance
Sensing it, you compel me with a whisper
Don't go ... please don't go
And I, half-turning ... stay




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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1 posted 2001-04-09 11:22 PM


That don't go stuff grabbed my heart.....Marge you know you are amazing! I love this....beautifully done dear heart    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-09 11:26 PM


Marge, this was so very beautiful and so very romantic......thank you, Sue.

Suetang

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3 posted 2001-04-09 11:29 PM


This is so utterly romantic
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4 posted 2001-04-09 11:40 PM


Marge---This is done so well...one sweet moment and a stay...and you capture romance.  Loved it!
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5 posted 2001-04-09 11:48 PM


SEA~
I believe you and I were innoculated with the same *sigh* !
Thank you, sweetie.

Sue~
Thank you very much.

ForeverInBlueJeans~
I appreciate your thoughtful reply.

Martie~
Doesn't life just give us some of the sweetest moments to write ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-04-10 12:54 PM


This is so pretty!
Love it

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-04-10 03:19 AM


Insect~
Thank you for dropping in.
It is good to see you.
I'm really pleased that this one caught your eye.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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8 posted 2001-04-10 08:02 AM


Margie girl, no one does it like you love. Oh I love this one, this is staying up in the office to bring some peace in me. I adore this one dear heart, as always, you have written an absolute beauty.

PERFECT truly prefect

Love it and you
              take care and shine on Margie girl

love and warm stuff
                  Mushy
                    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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9 posted 2001-04-11 12:13 PM


In that moment of silent twilight pause
when we become aware of the parting hour
========================

Margie girl... you breath poetry..
and we inhale it  
this is so cool in its imagery, phrasing and sentiment...
love that sensual side (whoowhoo) *L*

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Marge-
Beautiful, my friend....
I love the romance..

hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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11 posted 2001-04-11 01:14 AM


Marge,

This is pretty  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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12 posted 2001-04-11 01:50 AM


Ah....sigh....romance....ummmmm, you sure know how to say it.
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13 posted 2001-04-11 02:35 AM


Lovely and extremely romantic.  Joyce
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14 posted 2001-04-11 10:52 AM


...a finger trace....

delicious....

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15 posted 2001-04-11 11:32 AM


I cannot imagine (were it I) that I would be any less wishfully insistant
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2001-04-12 07:47 PM


Marsha~
On display in your office is the next-best-thing to 'published'.

JanetMarie~
A little piece of heartfelt reminisce ...
Just what the doctor ordered !

Vicky~
Me too !  

Michael~
Thank you.

Mysteria~
I 'listen' ... it speaks volumes.

Joyce~
I think I'm hooked on extreme !

LadyInWhite~
Yes .... it was !

Wilfred~
Awwwwww !  Thank you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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