Open Poetry #13 |
Silent Twilight Pause |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Silent Twilight Pause ~*Marge Tindal*~ Just before the turn of evening After the setting of the sun In that moment of silent twilight pause when we become aware of the parting hour You turn and catch me mid-sentence ... Shhh ! ... a fingertip trace across my lips Your half-smile of longing begs me stay I am torn with tender reluctance Sensing it, you compel me with a whisper Don't go ... please don't go And I, half-turning ... stay ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
That don't go stuff grabbed my heart.....Marge you know you are amazing! I love this....beautifully done dear heart SEA |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge, this was so very beautiful and so very romantic......thank you, Sue. Suetang |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
This is so utterly romantic |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge---This is done so well...one sweet moment and a stay...and you capture romance. Loved it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I believe you and I were innoculated with the same *sigh* ! Thank you, sweetie. Sue~ Thank you very much. ForeverInBlueJeans~ I appreciate your thoughtful reply. Martie~ Doesn't life just give us some of the sweetest moments to write ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is so pretty! Love it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ Thank you for dropping in. It is good to see you. I'm really pleased that this one caught your eye. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, no one does it like you love. Oh I love this one, this is staying up in the office to bring some peace in me. I adore this one dear heart, as always, you have written an absolute beauty. PERFECT truly prefect Love it and you take care and shine on Margie girl love and warm stuff Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In that moment of silent twilight pause when we become aware of the parting hour ======================== Margie girl... you breath poetry.. and we inhale it this is so cool in its imagery, phrasing and sentiment... love that sensual side (whoowhoo) *L* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Beautiful, my friend.... I love the romance.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, This is pretty Michael Proust- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah....sigh....romance....ummmmm, you sure know how to say it. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely and extremely romantic. Joyce |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
...a finger trace.... delicious.... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I cannot imagine (were it I) that I would be any less wishfully insistant |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ On display in your office is the next-best-thing to 'published'. JanetMarie~ A little piece of heartfelt reminisce ... Just what the doctor ordered ! Vicky~ Me too ! Michael~ Thank you. Mysteria~ I 'listen' ... it speaks volumes. Joyce~ I think I'm hooked on extreme ! LadyInWhite~ Yes .... it was ! Wilfred~ Awwwwww ! Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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