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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-09 09:11 PM



When the morning erupts,
my soul will find you.
No use to look back.
I need to look forward.
I smell,
your sweet presence.
I long for,
you warmth.
I feel,
your quiet breathing.
I want,
your soft touch.
When my night descends,
my life will expect you.
No need to remember.
The present surrenders,
my heart to your hands,
my lips to your kiss,
my eternal love.
In you I lose,
my will.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-09 09:22 PM


Romantic....romantic....romantic.....*sigh*  loved this    SEA
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-04-10 09:02 AM


See what I miss when I sleep too early.  Well, it was great to wake up to.  
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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3 posted 2001-04-14 02:02 PM


the total giving of oneself to another. . .

excellent walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-14 05:29 PM


This is a love song waiting to be played.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-04-14 06:49 PM


Very nice walker. James
Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
6 posted 2001-04-14 07:27 PM


Truly excellent.

"Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham

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