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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-04-09 08:56 PM



Cursive Lines

Cursive moves, loops and roundings
lines of m’s to infinity
would you watch the loops and swirls
trailing on through eternity

taught at young age the twirling feel
lost from time in computer’s real
but found again in dark of night
when electric leaves one in candle’s light

cursive lines, an easy move
leaves me thinking in pensive groove
so first draft of mind then finds
me penning swift in cursive lines

like riding bikes, my eye is pleased
by cursive line, the soft touch eased
by light and swirl as my mind twirls
and layers unfold by ease unfurled

Oh! I would like to show you my cursive lines
as I would enfold you into more easier times

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-09 09:03 PM


Karilea--yes, I have been doing a little swirling myself...it is freeing..your the best!
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2 posted 2001-04-09 09:16 PM


Kari dear heart, always your lines pull me in, utterly splendid love first class

and now your cursive lines, will enfold and hold, for all eternity

I love this and you know I will keep it here with me

Take care love as always
                Puck
                  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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3 posted 2001-04-09 09:25 PM


very creative....I like..I like.... SEA
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4 posted 2001-04-09 11:04 PM


Oh! I would like to show you my cursive lines
as I would enfold you into more easier times
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One could only wish.

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5 posted 2001-04-09 11:24 PM


Where is the line to see your cursive lines?  
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6 posted 2001-04-09 11:31 PM


Karilea~

Lovely loops
Curvaceous curves
Curlicues
on all your words ...
Swirling~ Twirling~
Ever curling~
I just love your loop-de-loops ~

~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-04-10 10:10 AM


Cursive moves, loops and roundings
lines of m’s to infinity
would you watch the loops and swirls
trailing on through eternity

taught at young age the twirling feel
lost from time in computer’s real
but found again in dark of night
when electric leaves one in candle’s light
==============================
Oh! I would like to show you my cursive lines
as I would enfold you into more easier times
============================

me thinks you just have  
and the view is poetry in motion
very cool poem K!!

... you better kiss me ... cause you're gonna miss me ... when I'm gone ...

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