In your arms, I learn to live

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Open Poetry #13

In your arms, I learn to live

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-09 07:54 PM

Under the sheets,
we swim in an ocean of passion.
You lead,
I follow.
Paradise opens its gate,
and we enter.
My loneliness,
is swept away by the currents.
The waves,
swallow my sorrows.
Little fishes,
circle around my uncertainties and drown them.
And in your arms,
I learn to live.
You inflict in me,
your thoughts and I flourish.
Seducing me,
to all connected streams.
Where I encounter my primitive pleasures,
as I glide into you.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-09 07:58 PM

walker---On a roll with this subject matter latey! Do I need to tell you how much I like this one? Great write!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-04-09 07:59 PM

walker,

romantic and sensual,
an excellent poem

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-09 08:14 PM

we've still got that table open walker. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-04-10 09:15 AM

walker---take the table already!

wandering
Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 92

5 posted 2001-04-10 09:32 AM

Very nicely done. I enjoyed this

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

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