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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-09 06:29 PM

Dreams and Wishes

how do you say you miss the moon
when you have slept within it's spoon
and all the warmth that you seek
is wrapped inside the sun's heat
suddenly a shooting star
transforms you where you are
nevermore is black your night
forever touched by the light
see...dreams do come true
you dream for me, I wish for you

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-11-2001).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-04-09 06:43 PM

simple and quiet. . .

wonderful helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-09 07:02 PM

Simple yet very pretty

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-04-09 07:04 PM

this is quite beautiful

SEA

painted lady
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since 2001-04-01

Posts 48
on the wing or nectaring

4 posted 2001-04-09 07:09 PM

"you dream for me, I wish for you"

Last lines are soooo important. This one is fascinating, and a puzzle . . . says so much more than the rest of the poem. ???

pl

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils. Wm Wordsworth (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-09 08:01 PM

that is the way I view a dream! Never thought of it like that, thank you Helen

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

6 posted 2001-04-10 12:43 PM

Love this piece!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

7 posted 2001-04-10 04:41 AM

""you dream for me, I wish for you""
Hopefully I will dream and will wait for your wishes. Very Excellent

I love to nice poetry.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

8 posted 2001-04-10 04:35 PM

i am dreaming for you, i hope that yours and my wishes are granted.
Bernie
A smile a day keeps the world in

's.

Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-10-2001).]

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